Gruff Variations

Hey, if anyone is interested in buying the collection The Gruff Variations which features my short story and work by a bunch of amazing published writers you can buy it on Amazon at

http://www.amazon.com/The-Gruff-Variations-Anthology-ebook

This format takes requires the Amazon Kindle App  which you can download for free and use on your computer.

You can also get it in a bunch of other formats (including a regular PDF which can be printed) at Smashwords.com, that link is:

http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/142643

It's 7.99 and all of the money goes to two charities that are involved in getting books into the hands of kids who otherwise wouldn't have them.   Ok, pitch over.

You win some, You lose some Part II

So this round of the Amazon contest was based on scores from two expert Amazon reviewers reading an excerpt of your book.  Part of getting through the first round of the contest is that you get to read the reviews on the excerpt, and this afternoon those reviews became available.

One reviewer REALLY didn't care much for my excerpt.  After making it clear that they think nothing happens in the first eighteen pages of my book they ended the review by saying, "I don't see anything in this story happening, other than will Rell become bored and return home." Uh...ouch.

Here's the funny...and somewhat heartening thing...the second reviewer REALLY liked it.  After saying that I "excel at world building" and that I "poignantly captured" Rell's feelings, this reviewer ended by saying, "I think this is a strong example of young adult fantasy fiction. The writer skillfully gives a picture of the world, and provides some nice foreshadowing. The reader is piqued by the hints at Rell’s future and the role she may play. This was good writing that made me want to read more." 

Hopefully, someday some agent or publisher will have the same feelings that the second reviewer had.  Until then, it's enough to make me smile for today. 

Also, I made a point of sending out a query letter today.  It was my concrete way of battling that "Maybe I should just give up" feeling.  

One more thing, amid the writing drama, I did actually work on my dissertation today. 

You win some, You lose some

I have to say I knew this before I even read it, somehow, but Rell didn't make it through to the next round of the Amazon competition.   I'm supposed to get feedback and reviews from the readers who read it, which hasn't been posted yet, but it will be interesting to see what they thought.

Thanks to everybody who keeps encouraging me!

Happy

I have a great new haircut AND my short story was picked for the Writing for Charity digital anthology.   Since it's for charity I don't make any money on the story, but it's still nice that they chose it.  I am a happy girl right now.

At Last!

After a two week struggle, and lots of crunchy air dried clothes, we finally have a shiny new working clothes dryer.